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Greetings GFXartist's
here is my first submission of a photo--no manipulation:) while I've taken enuf photos to become aquainted with my camera's weakness, I still have gobs to learn in using it and photography in general. I'm still without a tripod. this one was processed in BridgeCS3 raw, then worked in PhotoshopCS3 for a bit more adjustment. I am using an intentional vignette to emphasize the white highlights of face and eyes even more. Please crit away as I can use all the constructive advice you care to give. thnx for viewing!!

(a different B&W version of this photo is in my blog. while very small you can still get an idea of the amount of noise without using Noiseware Pro plug-in)


Canon PS A640; FL 29.2; f/4.1; metering mode: pattern; ss 1/125; no flash
 
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Avatar tomato04

 10/09/07 @900

what a cute photo :)
 
Avatar Daykan

 10/09/07 @913

Really cuteeeeee!!! Very nice!
 
Avatar oldskool87

 10/09/07 @931

nice
 
Avatar Madanapale

 10/09/07 @952

Nice capture.
Carlos
 
Avatar ersen-t

 10/10/07 @961

good and cute shot.
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 10/10/07 @976

Nice dog.

The crop and frame building is your choice and a matter of taste. I like it.

What could be improved is the sharpness. The picture is soft, cause the speed was kind of low. Otherwise, the dof could be higher, so the eyes are in focus.

The exposure is good. The white parts seem to me on the verge of over-exposure, but nothing seems burned, so you can darken it if you wish.

For a better result:

Use 'aperture priority'. Take the picture when there is more light.

That will allow you closing the aperture for a better dof, and hopefully still have a faster shutter speed. (to increase dof you can also get a bit further away from the dog).

Focal point should be the eye. I think here it is more toward the nose.

If you are worried about burning the white parts, use a negative compensation of one stop (-1/3).

And Bob is your uncle. :)
 
Avatar Phos

 10/10/07 @010

wow Roadrunner that's a wonderful list of feedback. first...actually bob is my brother
here's some info I didn't give up front cuz I wanted to see how anyone might crit first--
the image 'out of the camera' is much sharper but overflowing with noise, so much so that I could not submit this without first purchasing Imagenomic Noiseware Pro plug-in. the parts here that are soft are the results of the plug-in. soft may not be ideal but its much better than noise and allows the image to be submittable. I gave the Exif info but these are the settings the camera chose as I had it on auto. I've learned my camera tends to overexpose some so until I get the basics down on aperture priority or other manual settings I'm limited. I worked very hard on watching the white parts to not be overexposed, but more practise there I guess. the dof was decreased by the plug-in. and I'm having difficulty in working my camera right getting the focal point in focus....I need a tripod. lastly, the first time this work was uploaded the border came up messed. it was not my intention for there to be 2 white lines but for some reason that's how it uploaded the 2nd time. I am happy enuf with that surprise so have left it as is. your feedback is highly valued and will help me when I begin to transition to manual. thnx a bunch!!
tomato04, Daykan, oldschool, carlos, & ersen many thnx for you c's!! all of you are appreciated
 
Avatar twistoflime

 10/10/07 @151

A pretty good first picture. Don't skimp on the tripod. Get one! Overall the image could use some brightening but you'd have to mask out the brightest spots to keep them from blowing out.
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 10/10/07 @169

Phos, a tripod is a good thing to have, but you wont need it for such shots. The idea is to take them fast enough, and in good light conditions it is a simple task.
 
Avatar moserArtist

 10/10/07 @237

A lot of analyses...

It is a bit soft. Was the dog moving?

Work your manual settings in your cam if you want to improve.
 
Avatar jawine

 10/10/07 @450

I can't really comment on photographic techniques, I do like this as it functions well as a portrait photo, the dog really gets a personality from the way he is pictures and the really close shot as if you are sitting just in front of him :)

(and yes get a tripod I always end up with fuzzy shots when I zoom in)
 
Avatar RvascoF

 10/10/07 @579

Agree with Roadrunner about closing abit the aperture so you can get a better DOF, great compo and lighting...!!!
 
Avatar zaclab

 10/10/07 @644

Cute dog :)
 
Avatar OzanKarabulut

 10/10/07 @722

Lovely capture!! :;)
 
Avatar Vasco

 10/10/07 @767

A nice moment and a nice capture. I agree with a lot of what has been said above (Roadrunner)
 
Avatar cupcake

 10/10/07 @880

Sweet capture.
 
Avatar Phos

 10/11/07 @696

twistoflime & Roadrunner, my hands are quite unsteady thnx to medicine I take;
thankyou so much for your C & C's and good advice!
moser, your advice of getting off auto and using manual happened yesterday thnx to your challenge!! don't know why I was so intimidated by that. I am indebted to this little challenge
jawine, thankyou for your c & c's and yes, I was sitting right in front of her
Rvascof, many thanks for your c's
Zaclab, thankyou
Ozan, thnx very much; I'll tell my dog you're winking at her--she is beautiful:)
Vasco, thnx for your c's and advice
cupcake,thankyou
you are all appreciated!
 
Avatar blackshad

 10/12/07 @307

i think everything has been said :)
keep it up :)
 
Avatar luminous

 10/12/07 @475

wow! very nice & cute:)
+7 (out of 7)
 
Avatar Maidith

 10/12/07 @835

Beautiful.
 
Avatar Phos

 10/13/07 @164

blackshad, thnx for c's!
luminous, many thnx!
Maidith,wow, thankyou!!
you and all the the others are very much appreciated
 
Avatar lusie

 10/14/07 @876

Phos, eyes are so kind.... like it.. 8\8 :)))
 
Avatar HarikA

 10/18/07 @360

(thumbup)
 
Avatar Phos

 10/20/07 @699

and kind companion, lusie. thnx much
and thnx as well HarikA
 
Avatar Fuchsia

 12/11/07 @422

Love it! :)
+10
 
Avatar mamoun

 12/11/07 @662

Nice work. : )
 
Avatar Phos

 12/11/07 @827

thankyou Fuchsia and mamoun
 
Avatar LadyHydralisk

 01/03/08 @240

good, I tire of photo manips....magazines these days....

+8
 
Avatar Phos

 01/06/08 @991

thanku LadyH
 
Avatar Zazill

 01/08/08 @314

Great portrait capture, like the b&W :)
 
Avatar Phos

 01/08/08 @725

thnx much Zazill!
 
Avatar killadore

 01/10/08 @488

yup, got nothing new to add to the list of constructive crits. so i'll just say it's a very sweet pup ;)
 
Avatar Phos

 01/10/08 @914

sweeter than you can know!!
thankyou killadore for stopping by
 
kasper94

 01/17/08 @236

Very cute dog!
 
Avatar Phos

 01/17/08 @860

thankyou kasper, and welcome
 
Avatar ronn

 01/25/08 @089

a little late, but i love the details and cropping... very charming dog too! :) +10

ronn
 
Avatar Phos

 01/28/08 @079

its never too late to give someone a smile! thankyou, ron
oh, by the way there was no cropping on this
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 02/18/08 @390

Awwwww. I want one! He's adorable and you've captured his personality so well. I like your choice of crop here. It creates a pleasing composition. I think a slightly lower aperture would have helped to bring more focus to the dog's nose and right eye.

Nice work.
 
Avatar Phos

 03/04/08 @740

thankyou for your c&c's MsML!
 
Avatar Osito

 03/26/08 @376

No manipulation? whoa
Amazing !
ITs so cute btw!
 
Avatar Phos

 03/27/08 @720

Osito--thnx!!
 
Avatar valentine9

 04/11/08 @944

Awwwwwwww. Cute. Nice pic. If it was me i would crop in the left side a little. (thumbup)
 
Avatar Phos

 04/12/08 @029

thnx for viewing and c & c's valentine9.
I don't want to crop into her muzzle so I like it as is. any constructive feedback is always welcome, tho!
 
Avatar Jacobine

 04/19/08 @782

So sweet :)
 
Avatar Myryelfe

 04/23/08 @803

very nice, thanks for your comment!!!
 
Avatar Phos

 04/24/08 @245

Jacobine, Myryelfe, thnx for the c's!
 
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